Monday, April 21, 2008

revision

these words are raw from rereading
raised bloodred from rereading
these words are bloated from rereading
are saturated to dripping from rereading
rereading these words is making them bloated and
saturated to dripping is making them raw red raised
sores
this rereading is making words is making the words
sore and bloody and angry to the point of
raising up redraw and angered
rereading these words
these words are raised and bloated and angry
the anger in rereading these words is raised these
words are words these are words
words are these angry words are these raw are these bloated
are these are these words
words are these words are these words are these
words
are these.

originally published in Alligator Stew, vol. 1, # 1.

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